The Good:
there was a time when I felt Like i was watching dbz again! the fight was decent and the voice work.
The Bad:
I don't like the fact that you rush it right away into the fight! you could have build up the suspense. Maybe you could have done it on Episode 2. I couldn't even get familiar with the Protagonist name.
my advice start over with something else it's too! late to go back now! if this what you started with! i,m surprise they gave you a B- I say more like a C+ nah! a Regular C, sorry! man it was rush that's what killed for me! don't take this to heart, I don't grade like a normal viewer.